essay on the small place by jamaica kincaid the research question being how she represents tourists in her book

I initially wrote an essay, but my teacher pointed out that I heavily relied on contextual information rather than effectively justifying and developing my claims. Furthermore, my essay 

lacked directness and veered off-topic. below I have two documents attached one of my
notes and essay, another of my teacher’s comments. Please let me know if the comments are not legible
Please edit my essay regarding the points below I’m open to them changing based on your expertise

  • how tourists are ignorant

  • how Kincaid depicts Antiguans as ones who are consumed with pleasing white tourists and who long for validation from foreigners

  • how Kincaid unleashes some of her sharpest sarcasm not to attack tourists but to unfavorably compare Antiguan conduct to tourist innocence

  • how we readers are tourists (must be included)

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