This home work has two steps.
First step is to write an extended definition essay -to which I did-. The second step is to edit it, and that is what I would like for you to do.
I have submitted three pdf’s:
1. The PDF named “Submitted essay” contains the essay I wrote and submitted.
2. The PDF named “Rubric comments + Original essay assignment” contains the feedback from the professor to which I’s like you to apply on this revision essay that you are going to write. It also contains the original essay assignment which was the assignment provided at first to write the first essay.
3. The PDF named “Essay Revision Assingment” contains the prompt that wasgiven after the original essay was written.
I need to submit the revision of this original submitted essay applying the comments and feedback. All directions for this essay writting are written on thePDF that says assingment, make sure to read to whole page. I don’t have any personal preferences on what to do or not in this essay, as long as you are following the instructions.
Thank you very much!