Edit this paper. It needs more sources.
These are my instructor’s feedback: “The one I highlighed in red is not an appropriate source because not peer reviewed–so you cannot use that one, Bates, Miss. “A Few Notes on Dorothy Sayers’s UNPLEASANTNESS at the BELLONA CLUB.” Miss Bates Reads Romance, 16 May 2019, missbatesreadsromance.com/2019/05/15/dorothy-sayers-the-unpleasantness-at-the-bellona-club/. Accessed 31 Jan. 2024.” ” You can probably find a “history of the gentleman’s club in the UK”—that is a very different term in the US (which usually means a strip club!). This will aid you in your discussion. There are lots of different clubs (the list of other Clubs Wimsey belongs to are included in the “biography” before the novel begins).
Do consider the staff at the Bellona club, as well as some of the “minor characters” like Wetheridge. ” “You will want to get more specific in the topic sentence side of things. I think some specific analysis of characters in the club and the rules of “decorum” and behavior would be good—and you will need to draw some conclusions about the importance of noticing these things. What does a focus on the club itself tell us about the meaning of the novel? That might be only the introduction/conclusion–but it is important–and will probably lead to a better thesis once you can answer it.”