Thesis statement & Introduction:Introduction clearly states purpose of paper in engaging and thought-provoking way. The research question is defined and the importance/significance of research is discussed. Appropriate background information is clearly explained. The introduction concludes with an informative thesis statement.
Breadth of Literature Review:Literature review thorough; excellent choice of at least 12 primary scientific sources.
Analysis and Discussion of Literature: Sources are integrated, organized, used very effectively to support all major points; excellent context. Specific experiments are discussed. Controversies, inconsistences, and critiques identified.
Discussion & Conclusions: Key points very clear; discussion insightful and engaging; conclusions very well-supported by the evidence. Future experiments delineated. Contribution to overall field addressed.
Use of Figures: Figures excellent and engaging, very clearly illustrate major findings
Experimental Design
(Lit Reviews & Intros):Excellent understanding of experimental design in cited sources
Data Analysis idaeal alyout
(Lit Reviews & Discussions): Excellent understanding of data analysis in cited sources
Ideal layout of paper:
1. The hormone functions
2. hormone interaction
3. Importance of Gut health
satiety gut health , roles of hunger
4. how high fiber imporves health
5. starting day with a healthy meal (breakfast)
6. how protien increases stability in secretion of hormones
7. what spefic foodx impact this hypothesis