I have attached Chapter 2 and I need it edited to add more information especially under the topics that seem a bit under developed. I do not need a title page or to reformat the headings and such. I just need more direct, concise, yet informative info added. Please do not add lots of words to simply add to the paper’s length. Each section compares and contrasts studies then draws a conclusion. Please keep this flow while making changes. Please do not delete any information, just add to enhance the readability and understandability of the Chapter.
Please enhance Chapter 2 by providing further detail on the underdeveloped topics.
- Incorporate additional direct citations from the provided sources to support your assertions.
- Avoid unnecessary adjectives or wordiness often used for padding the text.
- Add more statistics and numbers using direct citations from the sources attached.
- If you add sources, please only use peer-reviewed scholarly journals or studies.
- The meat of the paper should be close to 30 pages not including the reference pages.
Thank you!