I have attached two different Litterature review, Please provide individual respose/ constructive feedback to both following the direction below.
Review the attached paper below: draft literature review and provide constructive feedback. To complete the review, provide tracked changes to your peer’s word document downloaded. Then, reattach the document and also provide a synopsis of your findings in your reply.
A few thoughts below:
- Point out the strengths as well as the weaknesses of the document.
- Offer suggestions, not commands.
- Editorial comments should be appropriate and constructive. Be respectful and considerate of the writer’s feelings.
- Be sure that your comments are clear and text-specific so that your peer will know what you are referring to (for example, terms such as “unclear” or “vague” are too general to be helpful).
- As a reader, raise questions that cross your mind, points that may have not occurred to your peer author.
- Be careful not to let your own opinions bias your review (for example, don’t suggest that your peer completely rewrite the paper just because you don’t agree with his/her point of view).
- Reread your comments before passing them on to your peer. Make sure all your comments make sense and are easy to follow.
- Avoid turning your peer’s paper into your paper. Meaning keep their voice and help them make adjustments where necessary.