Here is some feedback from my professor :
Body 1 – this should prove the problem exists. give background and data showing African Americans are disproportionately impacted by mental health disease and access to care.
Body 2 – should explain why this problem exists. What are the barriers to care. You would use your information from body topic I & II here.
Body 3 – Unclear on what the solution is. Who should use this framework? How does it change access? Has this framework been effective? How do we address racism?
Body 2 – should explain why this problem exists. What are the barriers to care. You would use your information from body topic I & II here.
Body 3 – Unclear on what the solution is. Who should use this framework? How does it change access? Has this framework been effective? How do we address racism?
I’ve wrote my paper, pls rewrite them in your own words to prevent plagiarism and fix anything to make to look better and logical