The essay I submitted is what I have done so far. This is my teacher’s feedback on it which need to be incorporated:
discussing
three elements of K pop and communication may be too much for a 5-6 pg.
paper. Just one of the aspects you mentioned could be a journal
article. My suggestion is to choose the one you feel is most interesting
and focus on that. Once you settle on which aspect, reshape the thesis
to be argumentative.
three elements of K pop and communication may be too much for a 5-6 pg.
paper. Just one of the aspects you mentioned could be a journal
article. My suggestion is to choose the one you feel is most interesting
and focus on that. Once you settle on which aspect, reshape the thesis
to be argumentative.
The
lack of specific examples is detrimental to the current draft. The
accessibility and ubiquity of K pop idols online now should provide
numerous possibilities in providing examples regarding any of the
elements you mentioned.
lack of specific examples is detrimental to the current draft. The
accessibility and ubiquity of K pop idols online now should provide
numerous possibilities in providing examples regarding any of the
elements you mentioned.
The one I chose that I feel is most interesting is the K-pop’s impact on global trends.