Marketing Thinking (MT) Challenge 3.2 (C): Creating a Blue Ocean in or outside a Red Ocean

 This is the critque my professor  gave for my orginal version he wants me to fixi it:

For Challenge 3.2C, your Strategy Canvas is missing along with an in-depth Four
Actions Framework analysis. You haven’t identified a Blue Ocean.”
Attached Below is the orginal one that i wrote and got the critque for so if it helps to see what i did wrong it can help guide you.  After that is just the instructions to the  thinking challege. 

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