Approximately 1400-1600 words should be devoted to exegesis and 1000-1200 words to the objection, for a total of approximately 2500-2800 words
this is an expansion of the work in the document you have to build on the ideas in the document.
Talk More about the natuarl and the unnatural
expand more on Rei Kawakubo’s art and why it deemed unnatural
expand in the intro
talk more about the western hegemony and the idea of fashion coloniazation and decolonialization
be formal
in the objection part I mentioned how there is cultural imperialism in the world of video games and how the western hegemony affects the trends of the charachter models expand more on that give more creative examples from the real of video games.
in the exegisis analyse the chapter and the ideas just the way I analyzied it be critical give opinions, and thoughts
add a philosophical lens into it add philosophical theories and ideas that alligns with what is written.
Also in the exegisis don’t summarize everything just talk about what only allign with what is written