i have attached the work with the notes i need you please to fix it and add on it note
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Please find attached the dissertation with my comments. Also, there are several areas that need significant improvement:
- It is unclear where your research was conducted. Where, when with who?
- The methods section lacks clarity, the data collection techniques, and the rationale behind choosing these methods.
- There is insufficient information about the interviews. Please provide details on who you interviewed, the criteria for selecting participants, and the number of interviews conducted.
- Your dissertation should include a comprehensive explanation of how data was collected and analyzed. Describe the tools or software used for analysis and provide a step-by-step account of the analytical process.
- Ensure that your writing is clear and coherent. Each section should logically flow into the next, and all statements should be supported by evidence from your research or literature.
- Answer the research questions in the conclusion based on your findings and ensure that you link your conclusions to the existing literature.
- Citation is an issue throughout the literature review. Please improve your citations by ensuring that all sources are correctly cited and that you use a consistent citation style. Proper citations will strengthen your arguments and give credit to the original authors.