This is the initial assignment
Write a research proposal of 5,500-6,000 words covering the following points:
What is your intended area of research and why is this justified?
How would you describe yourself as a researcher – explain in terms of the following areas:
Positionality, Insider/Outsider, Relationship to your possible research participants
Given your positionality, how do you intend to design your research?
What methods will this lead to?
What possible ethical issues can you anticipate?
I wish for help with editing to help achieve the pass criteria. I have attatched the original essay aswell as my supervisors feedback