I’ve already submitted the assignment. Could you review my teacher’s feedback and make the necessary corrections? That’s all I need.
Prepare a 7–10-page business analysis that explains the generic business strategies for an organization, analyzes the business strategy used and the company’s business model, analyzes the corporate strategy of the company and the overall corporate structure and management systems, and analyzes the strategic fit between the business and corporate strategies.
Teahcer Feedback:
- very good narrative here, seems very solid with so much information here, it seemed lacking in some type of solid research and citing of specifics, need a little more of this for a more solid picture. Ex. you say “Offering unique products” – such as? Also, You have no citing of sources at all here.
- This section seems to have been skipped over entirely.
- You talk about the operations of this company in making the next sale which is more their business strategy. But, you need to talk about its corporate strategy in context to the rich body on knowledge of corporate strategy that’s out there, including right in the classroom Resources page. This topic is rich in literature, you need to use and cite some more specific concepts from your research here. Check out all the resources on the resource page here in this classroom.
- The paper is well organized into major sections and this is vital, good work here. However, there is a general lack of providing supporting evidence throughout the paper. You need to clearly display more specific and technical knowledge taken from your assigned readings and cite accordingly both using in-text citing and a reference page at the end of the document. Then you need to find references just about the company on the web.