‘The conditions (political, economic and social) of African-Americans in the USA were little better after emancipation than before.’ Assess the validity of this view in the period 1800-1910.

I have writen most of my cousework. 

need it to be slightly rewritten and add refrences and citations which is vital. 
I have poorly done the citations so can you either find articles and sources that are suitable or find newer ones that are just as valuable. 

there is three sections to this essay:
Research essay 
interpration 
Sources 
I will link them all. 
I have also added notes and suggestions of my teacher, Highlighted in yellow. 
Here is a checklist to help:

     

     

    History Coursework

    Checklist

    Please make sure you have done the following:

    The basics….your coursework should be
    handed in, in the following format:

    •  The correct title with the correct dates at the top
    •  Double-spaced and with your name and candidate number
      on every page (preferably in the header) and a total
      word count
    •  In size 11 font and with normal margins so we have
      plenty of space to annotate
    •  Fully referenced with both footnotes and a bibliography
      – organised logically eg. Alphabetically
    •  An appendix with your 3 sources and 2 interpretations
      clearly numbered and in the order in which they appear in the essay
    •  Attach a completed Candidate Record Form, fully completed (ie. double-check
      you have entered your name and candidate number twice, your title and
      your word count, as well as signing/dating it)

     

    The essay needs….

    •  A clear introduction which introduces the major themes
      and sets out a clear line of argument. 
      Make sure you have addressed how the issue under discussion might
      have
      changed (or stayed the same) over the period in question
    •  Paragraphs which have a clear point at the start and
      then use
      specific supporting evidence to back this up (this should be
      from both sources and your own knowledge), make sure you include
      analysis throughout – you should be
      continually answering the question and linking back to your overall
      argument
    •  Coverage of the whole 100 year period (you should check
      that you have mentioned every decade at least once, and definitely should
      not have a gap of more than 10-20 years)
    •  A conclusion which comes back to your overall argument
      and
      fully
      explains why you believe that to be the case.  It should not include any new evidence
      but instead should aim to stand back and look at the issue over the whole
      time period

     

    Primary sources – you MUST have three of at least two
    different types (ie. you can’t have 3 speeches)

    •  Start the evaluation of each source with a brief,
      explained judgement on how valuable it is to a historian
      in finding
      out about the issue in the question?
    •  You must look at both content and
      provenance for each source.
       For example,
      think about the following for each source (not all of these may apply to
      every source but you should make sure you have discussed all that are
      relevant):
      • What does the content
        reveal / what can you infer from it about your question? How does this
        make it more/less valuable?
      • The perspective of the
        source – who wrote it? what was the purpose? How does this make it
        more/less valuable?
      • The social, political,
        intellectual, religious and/or economic context in which it was written
        – when was it written?  How does
        this further explain its perspective? 
        How does this make it more/less valuable?
      • How credible is the
        source?  How much authority does
        it have?  Is it consistent with
        your other knowledge?  How
        comprehensive is it?  Is there
        anything it misses out?  How does
        this make it more/less valuable?
      • Is
        the source propaganda or does it distort the truth in any crucial
        ways?  How does this make it
        more/less valuable?

    NB.
    ALL sources are valuable to historians, you just have to focus on how valuable
    it is for answering your specific question – eg. propaganda or very
    exaggerated sources can still be valuable for telling us about attitudes or
    methods that were used at the time

     

    Historical interpretations

    •  Make it very clear from the start how convincing the
      interpretation it is, in relation to your question
    •  For each interpretation state briefly what the argument is that
      you are evaluating eg. ‘Huntington argues….’
    •  State what is convincing about it – use your own knowledge
      to do this and any other historians who would also support this
      argument. 
    •  State what is not so convincing about it –
      again use your own knowledge and any other historians who would
      contradict this argument
    •  You MUST also comment on the limitations/context of the
      interpretation.  For example:
      • Is the time or context in
        which the historian was writing significant in explaining their
        perspective?
      • Are there any other factors
        or limitations which might have influenced their argument? (eg. was
        certain information not available? Or do their personal beliefs tell us
        anything useful)
    •  Ensure you have done the process above for BOTH
      interpretations
    •  Evaluate which you think is the more convincing argument and
      explain why

     

     

    And finally…..

    •  Make sure the three elements above are integrated with
      each other so the essay flows
    •  PROOF-READ before handing it in – this
      should help you check spelling, grammar and the overall flow of the essay

     

     

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