Write
1. The draft of the essay( which is not checked revised not in logical order it arranged also not edited
-it has grammar mistakes, spelling, punctuation vocabulary and sentence structure and page layout)
2. The clear neat organized final version of the essay you have written above
-based on the information provided below
– the essay is about plans that BEREKET KIFLE MADE IN HIS LIFE( me). (-past plans, present plans how present goals are going , future plans, ways to achieve etc..what I achieve and fail
– the essay includes 10 pure large large paragraphs(1 paragraph contains 10 sentences— 1-introductory paragraph( make it start with hook or something someone said relating to my life.
8 paragraphs- body paragraphs
1-last concluding paragraph
While you are writing use this general information about me
– name bereket kifle
– grade 11 saint Joseph school now
– participate in laboratory, reading club, drawing, Red Cross club
– passionate about drawing
– since childhood I want to be astronaut, but I don’t make such a big plans in my life in the past maybe childhood issue don’t let me to make but I achieve everything I want because of my dedication habits for instance scholarships to saint Joseph, making small business by drawing etc
– present now I make plans because plans are ways to be what we want to be and achieving goals which are not able to be achieved without plans. Participation of my family in my academic journeys
– future I want to be astronaut and praise my country Ethiopia making her flag moving at NASA, to be religious person, changing my family life and add
something possible solutions to my country’s problems