Full topic: Describe any academic challenges you have faced, your preparation for success in your academic and career objectives or any additional information that you would like to have associated with your application. You may also use this space to explain any discrepancies in your academic history that you believe are not representative of your potential for academic success.
I would like the essay to have these elements:
1.
Came to the U.S. not prepared for English testing
Came to the U.S. not prepared for English testing
2.
Was put in Essol
Was put in Essol
3.
Had an inspirational teacher
Had an inspirational teacher
4.
Determinate to pass the class and excel
Determinate to pass the class and excel
5.
There was a chance that I would have to take a
reading class
There was a chance that I would have to take a
reading class
6.
Determinate to succeed in the U.S.
Determinate to succeed in the U.S.
7.
Even though the environment wasn’t hostile but there
was a language barrier (Spanish) that restrained me from making any friendships
Even though the environment wasn’t hostile but there
was a language barrier (Spanish) that restrained me from making any friendships
8.
Results: In only 9 months I was able to make
friends and socialize with others but the most important was the fact that I
was called and given a formal invitation to be given an award of excellence in my
essol class that not only did I surpassed but I beat all the chances of getting
into an additional reading class.
Results: In only 9 months I was able to make
friends and socialize with others but the most important was the fact that I
was called and given a formal invitation to be given an award of excellence in my
essol class that not only did I surpassed but I beat all the chances of getting
into an additional reading class.
I would also like if the essay started like this:
A
million questions surging through my mind one of them being whether some
decisions were appropriately made. Turns out the saying “everything happens for
a reason” is the answer to all of our questions, including mine. My arrival to
the U.S. felt like a whirlwind of uncertainties
million questions surging through my mind one of them being whether some
decisions were appropriately made. Turns out the saying “everything happens for
a reason” is the answer to all of our questions, including mine. My arrival to
the U.S. felt like a whirlwind of uncertainties
The words could be from 250-450.