The Impact of Social Media on Youth Mental Health: Examining the Need for Digital Wellness Education

I had someone write this Classical Argument essay for me (from this site) and I had aconference with my teacher and she said my paper lacked Ethos (credibility.) She statedthat there is no personal voice in the writing and that it’s very boring. She stated that youneed to give the reader a reason to care about what you’re writing. I need sources that can be found on the Sacramento City College Library Database that aren’t just scholaryarticles and journals to make it more interesting and I need someone to add personality to it. Talk about my 11 year old sister who is addicted to her IPad and has poor self image. The vocabulary used needs to be dimmed down a bit, I don’t write like that. I have provided my draft, the assignment grading rubric and also two essays I got full credit for previously soyou can guage how I write. I need someone who can rewrite this paper while changing aslittle as possible about the research. I need someone to add 1-2 more sources that areNOT academic journals/studies to make the paper more interesting and give it a personal voice. Thank you!