I have attached a draft of a thesis. This is a 4-page work.
1- I ask you to go to the section that addresses the collaboration of the Vatican with Monaco, and you will edit it. You have to include, show, or add that Monaco is a UN member state. What is important is that the constitution declares that the Catholic Church and Roman religion is the religion of the state.
2- I miss to adress the research question in the conclusion. Go to the introduction, and you will see that there are five research questions. Review all the research questions and answer them. So, in this part, you have to edit the conclusion by reviewing and answering the research question.
Please pay attention to my notes and if you need more details, let me know