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My Objective: I need help refining my dissertation proposal. I require someone experienced because the revisions need to be precise and there’s limited room for back-and-forth changes.
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Feedback Review: I have two feedback documents related to my dissertation proposal that I will be uploading. It’s important that these are read carefully to understand the necessary modifications. Particularly, my lecturer found my proposal to be too broad.
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Specific Focus Required: Based on my lecturer’s feedback, I need to limit and narrow down my topic. The suggestion was to focus specifically on collaboration on student achievement, but I’ll upload the lecturer’s comments for more clarity and to ensure the revisions are accurately aligned with their advice.
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Enhancements I Need:
- The proposal requires additional citations.
- I need to include at least 21 references in total.
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Future Assistance: If I’m satisfied with the help on my proposal, I intend to seek further assistance for the entirety of my dissertation.
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My Timeline: There’s a timeline in my assignment and another one in a separate document that I’ll upload. Both need to be reviewed and factored into the revision of my proposal.
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Lecturer’s Comments and Clarity: I will upload the documents containing my lecturer’s comments. It’s crucial for me to confirm that these comments are visible and correctly interpreted for the revisions.
Once I upload the feedback documents and any other related files, I’ll look forward to proceeding with the review and the needed adjustments to my dissertation proposal, ensuring it’s more focused and aligned with my lecturer’s guidance.
Please note all sources used will be carried through into my dissertation