Case study in relation to terms of carriage of deck cargo and liabilities for the carrier

I have done the assignment but it does not follow the school’s instructions. 

I am attaching 2 files: 1 file with the instructions and 1 file with my essay which must be edited to comply with the instructions.

My teacher’s feedback is the following message:

You were called to defend the owner of the vessel “Storm Trooper”. The claimant is a bill of lading holder whose property, a sports car, although actually a deck cargo, was described simply as “loaded” on the Storm Trooper from Le Havre to Kopenhagen and got lost overboard during a storm. You are required to investigate what terms apply and why, what these terms provide for on-deck cargo and then to guide your client what defense line to follow. 

Please employ the OSCOLA Reference System wherever a reference is provided.
Overall, your coursework must be a well-organised, well-written report which contains clear conclusions reflecting your ability to write up an essay by synthesising, analysing and critically developing arguments.

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