Please edit with the following notes below were provided by my professor.
Overall, nice job. Rework your research questions, expand your methods section, correct you headings, and pay attention to your writing mechanics. Nice job on listing your references and with your in-text citations. Remove Blue Font and use level 1 headers
Feedback from pg 3
Not to use acrynoyms before spelling out the words. (BCFD) Baltimore City Fire Department & (OFM) Office of the Fire Marshal
And the sentence that starts with These issues are examinedin this paper are qualitative – Rework this sentence. It is a run on.
Feedback on pg 4
Use a Level I heading.
Feedback on pg 9
Document the detailed and logical steps you will take to complete your study.Who is your study population?Will a sample or the total population be used?What are the appropriate sampling methods for this research?How will you collect data?How will you maintain participant confidentiality (if appropriate)?
How is it random if you personally approach them? Also, wouldn’t the geographic locations of these areas make this endeavor difficult? Why would a survey through Qualtrics that is emailed to their respective divisions not work?