Colors of past and present using paleontology. Rewrite by incorporating feedback given.
March 18, 2024March 18, 2024
Feedback given: Strong start, then gets rougher and more like a technical report. The content is mostly in place, the communication style needs work.
If the methods are meaningful to your narrative, explain that. Many are mentioned but why?
-Digest some of the quotes. You can repackage them for your audience and it will make the article easier to read.
– Find a study that shows a positive connection/ impact of paleontology on the world. The intro hints at this but there’s no data-driven support (“X % of adults feel
or natural history museums account for # school outings, ect ect)
-Needs a free-to-use image. See overview for tips on locating that.
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