Comparison of two sources (A Comparative Analysis of AFMR and Independent Premium Articles on Weight Loss Drugs)

I’ve already finished my essay with some help from AI. Can you check it over, make edits if needed, and follow the instructions I attached? I’ve added the mark scheme, a sample good essay, and both articles. I want the wording to stay simple, nothing too Crazy or over the top if possible. It should be between 450-550 words. Also, please make sure it won’t get flagged for AI or plagiarism. Thanks, I really appreciate it!  PS fourth paragraph needs heavy fixing. 

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