Contrasting Rhetorical Strategies Emotional Appeal vs. Skeptical Reasoning in the Wolf Debate

can you help me out and rewrite the analysis paper I have based on feedback given my Proffessor- here is the feedback- I just counted you mentioned 6 times that Middleton offers emotional and two vivid imagery and you identified that as a problem, but the problem is you never gave an example of what you consider to be his emotion that lacks credibility or his vivid imagery that is problematic and I just don’t see it, I know that he discusses being in a museum and he oversees and overhears a mother with her child talking about the wolf, but that to me just seems like a way to engage with the audience not a way that disturbs or distracts his credibility, and so that’s a real opportunity here that- I mean 6 times in the course of your paper and you never engage with evidence, from the essay to prove that- and so that’s a real lack in the paper. I’ve attached both my original paper that was given feedback on and the paper assignment sheet