only need edits in a document please:
Conveys clear purpose, in a tone and style well-suited to the intended audience. Supports assertions, arguments, and conclusions with relevant, credible, and convincing evidence. Exhibits strict and nearly flawless adherence to organizational, professional, and scholarly writing standards, including APA style and formatting.
1- Assessment 2
Technology, Data Security, and Ethics
Feedback: There are a few items of the APA and organization of the paper that still are confusing. Start by reading the entire paper over and fixing the last pages where you start to repeat. 1. Thank you for creating a title page with numbering. You started with 0 but it is okay to start with the number 1. 2. Good job with the 7 needed pieces of information on the title page 3. Thank you for replacing the word Introduction with the exact title from the title page 4. Keep all your spacing uniform at double spacing. You still have gaps between headings, paragraphs, and references. You have to set your default spacing to zero, like this: Go to Home > Line and Paragraph Spacing. … Under Spacing, choose an option in the Line spacing box. Adjust the Before and After settings to 0 to change spacing between paragraphs. Select Set as Default. Choose All documents based on the Normal template. Select OK 5. Thank you for indenting your paragraphs 6. Thank you for the intext citations. Remember if there are more than two authors, you use the et al. abbreviation. For example, (Steinbock et al., 2013). For your references, each of the intext citations must have a matching reference. Each of the references must have a matching in text citation. The References need to be in alphabetical order. 7. Thank you for the headings over your sections that meet criteria of the scoring guide. However, at page 6, you appear to end the paper but then start over again on page 7 so that is confusing. Proofread the whole paper before sending it back through so that the organization and confusion can be removed for those pages. 8. Good job for the heading of the References page. Keep the double spacing going through all of the paper with no gaps. Compare how your paper looks compared to the student sample I sent. References still need to have a margin set for a hanging indent.
2-Assessment 4
Informational Interview and Course Reflection
Feedback: Spacing for the assignment needs to have margins aligned to the left only.Make sure you are resetting the margin after you bold and center the heading. References need to be formatted with hanging indent, in APA format, in alphabetical order. For example, this would be the first one: Naylor, M. D., Aiken, K. H., Kurtzman, E. T., Olds, M.O., & Hirschman, K. B. (2011, April). The importance of transitional care in achieving health reform. Health Affairs 30 (4). https://www.helthaffairs.org/doi/10.1377/hlthaff.2011.0041 If you click on the hyperlink of each reference, it should take you right to the correct information to have complete references.