This is the feedback I recieved:
Areas of Strength:
- Effective use of academic language throughout the paper.
- Clear structure with focused and well-developed paragraphs.
- Thorough incorporation of quotes, signal phrases, and citations following APA style.
Areas for Growth:
- Work on enhancing sentence structure variety for improved readability.
- Ensure consistent formatting of in-text citations and Works Cited page in APA style.
- Consider adding more critical analysis and interpretation of research findings for depth.
General Feedback on Writing Mechanics:
- Watch out for minor spelling errors such as “particpation” instead of “participation.”
- Carefully proofread for proper punctuation usage, especially around quotes and citations.