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Paper on third party intervention in the Cyprus conflict.
I like the structure based on setting up the context then analyzing the attempts at resolution. Still, it feels like the draft lacks the application of a model that would really enable to identify the drivers of conflict or hurdles in the peacebuilding process and that would be address in the recommendations.
I want a clear thesis.
Try to define it more clearly in the introduction and to work towards it in the body of the paper. Look specifically at third party intervention, explaining what may have changed between mediation from EU partners or mediation from the UN or other countries could be interesting.
I want an opinionated paper, with focus on third party interevention and how that has helped or not. Also how nationalism plays a big role therefore the conflict cannot be resolved.