Fictional story (this is part 2 of story) about a Afghanistan boy who’s meets soldier after his village gets destroyed

I need you to take a look at the file that is attached. Use that story and rewrite it so it sounds better and more fluent. You can change some aspects of the story but keep the majority of the aspects the same. I need you to include 10 of the 20 words that are listed below:

allay, bestial, convivial, coterie, counterpart, demur, effrontery, embellish, ephemeral, felicitous, 
furtive, garish, illusory, indigent, inordinate, jettison, misanthrope, pertinacious, picayune, raiment
(I did start and include a few as you will see, but I don’t think I did a good job) 

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