Instructions for Rewriting the Essay:
- Maintain Core Arguments and Structure:
- Keep the main argument points and ideas as they are strong and scored highly in the original example.
- The company analyzed (UNESCO) must remain the focus of the essay.
- Substitute References:
- Replace the current citations and references with alternative credible sources that support the same ideas.
- Ensure these references align with the original arguments and provide evidence for the discussed points (e.g., academic journals, organizational reports, or news articles about UNESCO).
so in order for the degree of changing citation for the rewrite, i can accept around 60-70% of change, which means you need to find 4-5 new citations to put into the essay, and keep 2-3 is fine. Also remember to stick to the instruction
- Do Not Overhaul Content:
- Avoid making major changes to the essay structure or content. The intent is to preserve the original ideas while introducing new references.
- Adapt Citations:
- Ensure that substituted references are cited properly in-text and included in the bibliography or works cited section.
- Follow the citation style specified for the essay (e.g., MLA, APA).
- Enhance Clarity (if needed):
- Improve sentence clarity or flow where appropriate, but do not alter the meaning or tone of the original arguments.
- Additional Suggestions for Substituting References:
- Use official UNESCO publications for organizational context.
- Look for academic research on intercultural communication, leadership in global organizations, or cultural preservation.
- Include credible media articles discussing UNESCO’s initiatives and programs.