Focused Ultrasound relating to anesthesia Comparison of focused Ultrasound vs. Traditional Anesthetic Techniques

I have attached my paper that was due it was like preliminary paper she made comments if you could please redo the paper making it make sense and adding what you need please read the instructions for the paper carefully. Thank You 

The topical paper is to be directly related to your chosen career plans and must relate to cell biology in some manner. Look through scientific literature to locate your topic. The topic
XXX may cover anything that is of interest to you. It could be a new area of specialty in a scientific discipline (why is it new – what changes in curriculum are required); alteration in provision of services for a discipline; a topic of current investigation; a genetic disorder related to a discipline; new technique in a laboratory or novel treatment for some illness; an environmental concern that is cellular in nature; new methodology or assessment area for education related to biology; etc.
 
As an example, let us use a new technique (again, your topic could be anything):
Your description of the topic should include–
1.   A clear and concise statement of the scientific problem being addressed by the technique XXX  — this is not the major thrust of the paper so it should be less than ½ page.
2.   Explanation of how XXX was used in the research, the industry — its application —- this is the main point of the paper and should be approximately 2 ½ – 3 pages in length.
3.   The results of the research findings obtained by using XXX — what this will mean for the general public – should be less than ¼ page.
4.   The implications of those results, both to the initial question and to society as a whole = the impact that XXX will have — should be less than ¼ page.
 
Grading Criterial for paper:
1. Length: The paper is to be between 4- 5 pages, but not more than 6 pages.
2. Design: In the paper, make sure to BRIEFLY describe your career interest (a logical place to put this is in section 1). I want to know why you chose your topic; however, I do not want the entire paper to be about your career choice.
3. Required Number of Sources: There should be at least three resources in which you utilize citations of specific information such as data, figures, measurements, dosages, treatments, etc. Quotes should only be used if they are very profound and add to the meaning of your paper. Having a large number of direct quotes should be avoided or will negatively impact the final grade.
4. Font: use either Times New Roman or Arial at either an 11 or 12 point size, not 13 or 14.
5. Line spacing: Double spaced
6. Source citations: Either a Bibliography, References, or Works Cited page
7. References: At least 3 or more listings are to be used and atleast one of source MUST be a formal scientific paper. NOTE: These references may be scientific papers from primary or secondary journals, review articles, clinical news media, etc. Please avoid the use of Wikipedia-type articles, educational pamphlets, or online dictionaries as a source; they are not acceptable. This is an example of an acceptable resource as formal scientific paper: https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC7252227/ (https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC7252227/)
This is an example of an unacceptable resource:  https://medlineplus.gov/sicklecelldisease.html (https://medlineplus.gov/sicklecelldisease.html) or https://www.cdc.gov/ncbddd/sicklecell/facts.html (https://www.cdc.gov/ncbddd/sicklecell/facts.html)
. These resources can be used but are not to be counted as a formal scientific paper.

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