I have it written and instructor’s feedback just needs to be corrected for grade

In pictures I will provide

1)Instructions

2) the paper that I turned in for grading
3) Instructor’s feedbacks
4)Grading Rubrick
5) Sources that are covered in class and can be included- links and uploaded documents (links down here)
https://glaad.org/reference/transgender
https://ebookcentral.proquest.com/lib/csun/reader.action?docID=660541&ppg=1https://www.theatlantic.com/health/archive/2014/07/should-we-fix-intersex-children/373536/
https://www.vice.com/en/article/bmp3zv/cooking-with-muxes-mexicos-third-genderhttps://www-jstor-org.libproxy.csun.edu/stable/24810569
https://www-jstor-org.libproxy.csun.edu/stable/24810569
https://journals-sagepub-com.libproxy.csun.edu/doi/full/10.1177/0891243217717710
IMPORTANT
PLEASE FEAL FREE TO ADD DELETE ANYTHING FROM MY OG PAPER AS LONG AS WE SATISFY PAPER REQUIRMENTS.
let me in any more information is needed. 
Professor’s overall comment
The bulk of the paper focuses on summarizing the act’s various proposals and whethr or not they will face barriers rather than applying the theoretical concepts. I also couldn’t find the other direct references to our course materials that were cited in the References. Please see my additional comments in text.

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