I have made some improvements to your statement:
– I have written 5300 words so far, which is the second draft. However, I am still struggling with structure, clarity and flow.
– I need to incorporate citations into my work.
– It is necessary to create a table of contents to improve the organization of my document.
– While there is a lot of theory included, I need to use it more effectively to address the question fully by incorporating data and case studies. For example, integrate the Ricardian and Keynesian theory with a more direct response to the question, rather than having them as standalone sections.
– The Argentina section requires reformatting to provide more clarity and structure.
– I need to include more information about the US
– I also need to expand on the crisis in Greece since 2018.