I think this is an excellent start to your literature review. Please see below for my comments to further improve your literature as you move toward completing your final research paper:
- Draw Clear Connections to the Research Question/Hypothesis: Clearly explain how each piece of evidence or research finding relates to your main argument. The literature review should lead up to the research question. Essentially, in your literature review, you are making an argument for why your work is relevant using previous research as evidence/support. This helps readers see the logic behind your conclusions.
- Keep the Project Manageable: As we discussed during our check-in this evening, keep your project manageable, and scale it back to complete in the time we have left in our course. You can always come back to this work and finish it at a later date.
- Proofread: Make sure to proofread your literature review carefully to catch any spelling or grammatical errors. Additionally, be sure that your reference list is organized in alphabetical order (which it is) and adheres to APA guidelines. Please consult the APA style guide for reference on how to cite journal articles here: https://apastyle.apa.org/style-grammar-guidelines/references/examples/journal-article-references.
This was the feedback I got based on the paper.
So for this first part here’s what need to be done, Literature Review (Draft #2) & Methods,
Total Paper Length: 7 – 9 pages
Instructions: For the purpose of this assignment, you will complete the following tasks:
- Revise your literature review using feedback from your peers and your instructor
- Outline what methods you will use to respond to your hypotheses/research questions.
- Complete your data collection.
My professor told me for the data collection it should be 5-10 responses because of the semester is almost over and the null hypothesis should be 5-10 reposnse if you have any question about that part.