I am a math and data theory major. Write an organized, unique, and impactful essay for my admission. Show not tell. Here’s my following template of what I want to write but you do not have to use. Reading this might be helpful what I did for my background. In addition, I have co-founded ultrasound oceanic biomedical lab in Korea in high school to foster students who are pursuing american education. You may use this information too if you want to. Please write it unique and impactful. Also, I want the introduction to be catchy without first-person narrative.
Here is an example of my intro: In our increasingly uncertain world, numbers provide precise and dependable answers. From a young age, I was attracted to the way that data unearths clarity from complexity, and how mathematical models unveil essential truths. My passion for math and data science has only grown over time, driven by three qualities: accuracy, tenacity, and ownership.
For many years, I have felt unsettled by ambiguity. Concrete answers, by contrast, brought about a comfort and a sense of control. This desire for clarity led me naturally to the precision of mathematics, where every problem has a solution, every pattern a reason.
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Get set, ready, go!
In today’s fiercely competitive world, success and failure are determined in every moment, and I’ve come to understand that the key to navigating this is a preparation. For me, success isn’t just about reaching a goal; it’s about having the strength and clarity to begin the journey in the first place. Preparation becomes a foundation that allows you to move forward, and to make the most of opportunities when they arise. In a world where so much is unpredictable, preparation gives me the power to take control of my own path, one thoughtful step at a time.
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I prepared a lot for the upper division: certainty, integrity, leadership. I think the reason why I was able to take so 55 credits in a year is because of certainty. The experience of Google Mantoship has given me certainty in the field I want to work in the future. In addition, through my research with Professor UC Riverside for coding energy deposition calculation for argon detection and ux designing for his experimental tool, I am constantly getting to know and analyze my field as a student or as a future researcher.
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Life is like a marathon—long and full of twists and turns. For me, perseverance has become the key. Whether it’s facing a tough class, dealing with personal struggles, or simply pushing through a rough patch, I’ve learned to believe in myself, stay focused, and keep moving forward. I’ve realized that success isn’t about speed or taking the easy route, but about sticking with it, no matter how many obstacles come your way. This is what being ready for me.