Proofreading and Revision of a short summary essay, with explanations to changes included

A. Use the following attached texts to revise and edit, and then submit the text with clearly designated markups of three total revisions to the structure, content, and organization of the text and five total edits to the grammar, punctuation, and word choice of the text.

B.  Discuss the changes you made to the text in part A by doing the following:

1.  Explain why each of the three marked revisions to the structure, content, and organization of the text were made.

2.  Explain why each of the five marked edits to the grammar, punctuation, and word choice of the text were made.

C.  Provide feedback to the writer of your chosen text by doing the following:

•   Explain why the introduction is successful or unsuccessful at capturing your attention.

•   Describe the greatest strength of the text.

•   Describe the weakest part of the text.

•   Explain whether the conclusion is successful or unsuccessful at bringing the text to a close.


D.  Acknowledge sources, using in-text citations and references, for content that is quoted, paraphrased, or summarized.

E.  Demonstrate professional communication in the content and presentation of your submission.

Are you struggling with your paper? Let us handle it - WE ARE EXPERTS!

Whatever paper you need - we will help you write it

Get started

Starts at $9 /page

How our paper writing service works

It's very simple!

  • Fill out the order form

    Complete the order form by providing as much information as possible, and then click the submit button.

  • Choose writer

    Select your preferred writer for the project, or let us assign the best writer for you.

  • Add funds

    Allocate funds to your wallet. You can release these funds to the writer incrementally, after each section is completed and meets your expected quality.

  • Ready

    Download the finished work. Review the paper and request free edits if needed. Optionally, rate the writer and leave a review.