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Golf has been Rayan’s primary passion and lifeline.
However, the maturity and wisdom he gained through his years of professional
play established an astuteness and certainty concerning his professional
aspirations. Witnessing and learning from his father’s journey from poverty to
professional success, Rayan showed an early interest in Business and his desire
to pursue a career there eventually. On top of his rigorous and consistent golf
practices and the direction of his non-profit, Rayan sought several internships
within the field of Business to affirm his ambitions and solidify his
intentions to study Business at an undergraduate level. In the summer of 2022
and 2023, he had a 12-week internship at AMED and Miadent, both wholesale
companies in the dental industry in Casablanca, Morocco. While at AMED and
Miadent, he gained firsthand experience across various departments, including
marketing, finance, and recruitment. As an intern, Rayan had responsibilities
like handling checks and ensuring their timely processing at the bank, as well
as preparing and delivering daily reports on sales, accounts payables and
receivables, stock, and daily expenses to the board of directors.
Along with these financial tasks, he also interacted with
clients, making follow-up calls to guarantee timely payment. These interactions
helped Rayan maintain positive client relationships and sharpened his
communication skills, especially in professional conversations and
negotiations. Through these experiences, he acknowledged the importance of
clear and concise communication in Business.