Write about the importance of shared space, and also the sharing of information is essential. Moving away from privatization.
expand on this:
Capitalism has been the predominant economic structure in recent decades. Its power structure, which encourages competition in authority and ownership, accelerates the invention of new technologies and services, influencing ways of living in the community. However, the convenience that these inventions came with, in the form of exchange under the financial hierarchy, which is the core value of capitalism, has led to a societal gap among economic groups due to an unbalanced exchange of knowledge and resources with reduced and impersonal currency, such as papers, metals, and code. As society progresses under the same financial structure, the problem of economic inequality becomes more visible and serious. While political efforts to address this issue have been made, they are not prominent enough to provide a fundamental solution. This calls for a new establishment of a common structure that puts less emphasis on the economy and more focus on societal growth as a whole, with the key being the embracing and essentialization of “share.”
And also, it’s only the final portion of the paper when you describe the actual site, if it is a physical site at all. The majority of the paper is about relations.
USE THE EXAMPLE ESSAY AS REFERENCE: INCLUDE IN THE ESSAY MOVING AWAY FROM PRIVATIZATION AND THE IMPORTANCE OF SHARED SPACE.