Hello, I would like you to rewrite the review following my supervisor’s advices and be more systematic and cohesion. It needs also detailed data analysis-methods (you can follow thematic analysis as the below suggested paper), discussion and coclusion! I am providing my whole draft, supervisor’s comments and suggested paper for looking.
Supervisor’s comments:
I feel that the tables are too long and contain too much detail.
The paper would be more concise if you could take some inspiration from the following paper and try to condense the tables into themes and describe their significance in terms of text and other literature on motivation.
See this paper as a possible inspiration?
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