First, i would like additions for 2 chapters about 3000-5000 words.
Also, I need the following editings: Please let me know on which pages the corrections should be made and highlight the points that need improvement, as well as any additions or corrections to references and content. 1. Highlighting the role of Frontex and cooperation: In the part I refer to Internal Security, very limited emphasis is given to border surveillance and maritime surveillance issues. Since 2015, Frontex has signed agreements with the Commission and the Satellite Center (SatCen) for land and port targets, while the cooperation with EMSA concerns exclusively maritime surveillance. → Addition: The specific part that analyzes the role of Frontex (in 2-3 pages) should be included and a clear reference should be made to the figure on page 103 of the book which I attach. 2. Academic and political context: The text does not present the general and political context that is crucial for understanding internal security issues. References to the three main strategies should be incorporated: o 2010 Internal Security Strategy o 2014 Strategy o 2020 Strategy You already mention the 2020 strategy, but the references from the other strategies should be completed. → Add references to academic papers that analyze internal security strategy and threats, with emphasis on texts such as the European Security Strategy (2003) and the SpaceSec document of 2005. 3. Technical corrections and terminology: There is confusion between the terms spatial resolution and temporal resolution. Revisit time is different from the spatial resolution of satellite images (30 cm). This should be analyzed precisely. → It should also be clarified that the 30 cm spatial resolution is achieved by both DigitalGlobe (MAXAL) and French Pleiades 2 satellites. The issue of satellite availability in Europe needs updating: while the text mentions “30 satellites”, it is likely to be 200-300 satellites. Please check and add reference. 4. Holistic approach to satellite systems: The analysis is mainly limited to GPS and satellite images, while the communication challenges faced by the EU are overlooked. Emphasis should be placed on a holistic approach to satellite systems (ISR: Intelligence, Surveillance, Reconnaissance) and reference should be made to the evolution of the term “Reconnaissance” thanks to the improvement of spatial resolution. 5. Additional references and avoidance of plagiarism: Paraphrasing is required in points that come directly from the book or other sources to avoid plagiarism. Adding new references and updated citations to academic texts is essential. Please read carefully and make corrections based on the above points. After the corrections are completed, a final check will be made for any technical errors or omissions.
The use of space-based assets for enhancing eu`s security: an analysis of the role of satellites in detecting and responding to internal security threats (Editing + Additions)
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