Thesis: The inability to balance personal needs with the needs of their relationship created many difficulties for Helen and Garp

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Thesis: The inability to balance personal needs with the needs of their relationship created many difficulties for Helen and Garp in The World According to Garp.
Argument 1
Jenny Fields’ radical independence formed Garp’s emotional life, which was to create the backdrop for his relationship troubles.
Proof 1:
Jenny’s philosophy is a manifestation of objectification as articulated in “Subjectify Me”: “Objectification is autonomy-denying, subjectivity-denying. Not considering the feelings of people” (Peters. Jenny’s dismissal of Garp’s complaints is typical: “You are not only my son, you are also a write. ‘Turn the tables on everyone else’ (Irving, p. 145).
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Argument 2
It ruled Helen and Garp’s marriage, as an absence of emotional reciprocity marred their marriage, the dangers of viewing other people as objects instead of subjects.
Proof 2:
As the article says: “Objectification is perilous precisely because it is so subliminal” (Peters. This dynamic, as shown by Helen’s affair and Garp’s coerciveness, is not what sees the other person as an independent being.
Argument 3
Jenny and Garp’s subjectivity as a whole, in the more universal sense, leads to their repetition of tragedies and interpersonal conflicts.
Proof 3:
It is illustrated by Garp’s admission that his mother was alone: “My mother,’ Garp wrote, ‘was a lone wolf'” (Irving, p. 201)
Likewise, “To subjectify someone is to imagine them as the protagonist, a whole person with agency and emotion” (Peters). Neither Garp nor Jenny captures this well.