it gotta start with my thesis and intro 6 other body paragraphs and citations from my notes and information from my outline can go into paragraphs I need at least 4 or 5 citations each paragraph MLA 9 citations
Thesis: The U.S. prison system is ineffective because of its inability to properly rehabilitate inmates, overcrowding, and limited resources for inmates, making what the inmates go through worse
there is an example of how its kinda suppose to be in onhe of them files