I need 12 pages for Chapter I and Chapter III. Both chapters needs to have 5 references. My Chapter II needs the most work which is literature reviews. Chapter II need 100 references. I do prefer my references to be 2019 – current. Here are the comments my professor left for Chapter II:
Evolution of social media can be more robust. Explanations of each of the early platforms helps, but also their roles in education and aides to teachers and students. This draft looks basically like a bunch of bullet points put together instead of a deep look at the research available. Work with Dr. Alaniz to provide the reader with more information so they may put your study in perspective for importance and impact on instruction and education in general. Do not add conclusions at the end of each section. Dissertations have summaries at the end of each chapter, not sections (APA style). From page 29 to the end, you seem to be developing Chapter 5 conclusions, recommendations, and implications. Those do not belong in chapter 2. Chapter 2 should be a minimum of 50 pages with around 100 reference sources used. Beef up this chapter.