I am writing my thesis research paper and having problems with my last discussion and conclusion chapters. My professor’s feedback:
I have looked at your findings.
It is missing a few facts. Get it right, scientific research is about facts, facts, and facts. Anything without it is your opinion.
This means that any discovery or causes of cyberbullying must be supported by evidence (in this case from literature). I am saying this because per the table you provided you have some rows of courses without any reference. Even those with references are just a single reference.
In reality, it is very difficult to use a single reference to make scientific conclusions. I hope you understand what I am saying.
I will suggest, you provide at least 5 different references to support each claim you make. If you have no evidence to support your claim, I suggest you don’t put up your own opinion. That will be unscientific and it’s very difficult to defend.
Let me know if you need an extra week to get this done.
The prevention strategies can be your own contributions so you don’t necessarily have to provide citations (references) if they are your own words. However, you have to cite if the idea is coming from someone’s work.
So I am going to provide my Chapter 2 (literature review) and my resources and I need someone who can rewrite my Discussion and Conclusion Chapters.